Write a Paragraph as a Formal Response to “Composting” by Na…

Write a Paragraph as a Formal Response to “Composting” by Natalie Goldberg   Now you will write a paragraph using the format we have been learning in class for formally responding to something you have read.   In the box below, write a developed paragraph response to “Composting” using the format you have learned in class.  This is not practice writing.  This writing is formal, and the audience (me) expects you to follow the form we studied and to edit for grammar and mechanics.  You need the following parts:  a topic sentence, evidence, and an explanation of that evidence.  Make sure to include everything needed in a topic sentence. Join at least two simple sentences with “and” or “but.” I suggest you write the paragraph by hand before typing it in.  Write a minimum of 250 words.  You can do more.

Mitral valve stenosis occurs when the valve between the left…

Mitral valve stenosis occurs when the valve between the left atrium and left ventricle becomes narrowed, which restricts blood flow during diastole and increases pressure in the left atrium. This pressure backs up into the lungs, causing pulmonary congestion and reduced cardiac output. Over time, the left atrium enlarges, which raises the risk for atrial fibrillation and blood clots. Patients often experience shortness of breath, fatigue, and palpitations, and more advanced cases can present with leg swelling or abdominal fluid buildup. What is the primary cause of mitral valve stenosis worldwide?