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For the three sentences and questions below, please answer both i. and ii. prompts. For each sentence you will (i) identify the errors, and (ii) provide a rewrite. Please include both parts in your answer for each example and appropriately label each part either i. or ii.

This question is another two-part question. (i) State what is wrong with the following sentence’s structure, and (ii) rewrite it more effectively. Sentence: Movements resulting from termination, layoffs, and leaves, recalls and reinstates, transfers in, transfers out, promotions in, promotions out, and promotions within are presently documented through the Payroll Authorization Form.

i. – Name the stylistic error made in the following wordy closing to a message. ii. – Rewrite the sentence with clear and concise phrasing.   Sentence: Please do not hesitate to call with any questions.

Rewrite the following sentence for concision and clarity. Sentence: A reduction in job-related accidents was achieved by an incentive program.

A petty cash fund requires less accuracy than a checking account.

Many pathogens use the same portal for entry and exit from the body.

Milrinone will NOT do what?

Which of the following is/are true of DNA replication?

The data that are magnetically encoded on the bottom of a check includes the bank identification number.

i. – Name the stylistic error made in the following wordy closing to a message. ii. – Rewrite the sentence with clear and concise phrasing.   Sentence: Please do not hesitate to call with any questions.