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The following is an A.I. generated text (something that none…

The following is an A.I. generated text (something that none of us should ever use in this class). It was prompted by interpreting the ending of Ray Bradbury’s story, “The Veldt.” However, there are major problems and errors with this response.  Counts 5 points (30% of the quiz) Write a one (1) paragraph (5-8 sentences) criticism of this excerpt in which you make critical comments on as many of the following areas as you can: *editing errors *correct use of MLA style *appropriate diction and style *development of ideas *accuracy *logical organization of ideas: Throughout “The Veldt” the advanced technology itself is portrayed not as inherently dangerous, but as a tool that becomes harmful when it replaces meaningful human relationships. It’s not technology that destroys the family—it’s their neglect of each other, their lack of emotional connection. The parents, George and Lydia Bradley, rely on the nursery and other gadgets to replace their parenting duties, which leads to the children’s growing resentment. In other words, blaming technology alone ignores the family dynamics at the heart of the story. For example, Bradbury writes, “They live for the nursery” (Bradbury pg. 56), emphasizing that the technology serves as a crutch for parents who fail to engage with their kids. The dangers arise not cause technology exists, but because it’s just misused. Additionally, Bradbury describes how George begins to realize this failure, noting, “George Hadley stood on the African grassland, looking out at the lions…” (pg. 58), indicating that it’s not too late to mend these relationships if action is taken. The idea that technology alone is the villain overshadows this more nuanced view.