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Copy and Paste your Day 2 writing into this quiz by clicking…

Copy and Paste your Day 2 writing into this quiz by clicking here. Now keep working on it. Today you should revise and expand your draft into its best form. Start by reading it through. Look for places that you repeat yourself –  make sure you summarize the argument only once – in the summary. Focus on the details in the story sections of your personal response. Do they show / allow the reader to engage with the scene? Add details, sensory imagery, and involve the reader. Check your verb structures – the summary should be present tense only; the personal response should use present tense when talking about the article, but will likely use past tense when referring to experiences in the past. Focus on succinct wording and clear paragraphs. Each paragraph should have one point or idea only – this is true for the summary and personal response sections.