I. Introduction  Thesis Statement: Steve Almond seeks to per…

I. Introduction  Thesis Statement: Steve Almond seeks to persuade readers on the “defense of male clutter” citing towards marriage experience, specific examples of “AMJ” and appealing to readers emotions with fun memories and life experiences.   II. Ethos  a. “One of the best decisions I’ve made in my three plus years of marriage”.  b. “My friend Owen, for instance, who is now happily married with a child”.   c. “Consider the donnybrook I got into with my first serious girlfriend”.  III. Pathos  a. “Either it functions as a reminder of our joyously unkempt bachelorhoods or it represents our wholly unrealistic hopes for the future”.  b. “Look, we all need something to remember our pasts by”.   c. “No, seriously honey,” I say, “you don’t understand. This album got me through 1997!”  IV. Logos  a. “In my own case, this junk included, but was not limited to, a rusty bread box dating back to the Eisenhower administration, two hand-painted walking sticks, a 78-rpm phonograph, a broken snow blower given to me by my old landlord, and exactly 4,123 CDs”.  b. “But what of the huge box of old electronics that lives in our garage, right between the abandoned tool kit and the stack of New Yorker magazines dating back to 1989?”  c. ” This is where the tool kit comes into play. We’re pretty sure we could construct this robot-let’s call it the AMJ-1200-but we need to learn how to use that soldering kit first, the one we never bothered unpacking”.   V. Conclusion  Rewarded Thesis: Defending “male clutter”, Steve Almond cites marriage experience, specific examples of “AMJ”, and appeals to readers emotions with fun memories and life experiences.  Yarbrough.PDF

Sample Outline  I. Introduction     Thesis Statement:  II.  …

Sample Outline  I. Introduction     Thesis Statement:  II.  Ethos       a.       b.       c.  III.  Pathos       a.       b.       c.  IV.  Logos       a.       b.       c.  V. Conclusion       Reworded Thesis:  In Defense of Male Clutter

I. Introduction     Thesis Statement: In this article, Steve…

I. Introduction     Thesis Statement: In this article, Steve Almond uses ethos, pathos, and logos, to persuade the audience that all “Accumulated Male Junk” has a purpose, meaning, or memories attached to it.   II.  Ethos       a. “One of the best decisions I’ve made in my three-plus years of marriage was to move all our belongings into our new home by myself.” (Almond 58)       b. “AMJ serves one of two purposes: Either it functions as a reminder of our joyously unkempt bachelorhoods or it represents our wholly unrealistic hopes for the future.” (Almond 58)       c. “But I had bought these shoes in the Old City of Jerusalem and had worn them to climb Masada and wade into the Dead Sea (this helped to explain their unique funk). (Almond 59)  III.  Pathos       a. “But she recognizes the genuine emotional needs these objects fulfill and she lets it ride.” (Almond 58)        b. “I slip it into the stereo and start thinking about how much that album meant to me when I was a miserable graduate student in Greensboro, North Carolina. Then I get all misty and crank up the volume and start dancing like an idiot.” (Almond 59)       c. “Their value resides in the particular set of memories and emotional associations held by their owner.” (Almond 60)  IV.  Logos       a. “My wife’s only persistent AMJ complaint concerns those 4,123 CDs I mentioned earlier. Her argument is entirely sensible. Now that we have a digital library, we should sell/donate/recycle the CDs.” (Almond 59)        b. “To which I respond by suggesting that none of us have made our peace with the present, not entirely. In this era of geographic dislocation, with people moving from city to city. unmoored from their histories, we all long for a stronger connection to our pasts.” (Almond  60)   V. Conclusion       Reworded Thesis: Steve Almond uses his “Accumulated Male Junk” to remember old memories and feel the emotional association the items withhold.  Cosper.PDF