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Throughout this unit, we have discussed how writers can impr…

Throughout this unit, we have discussed how writers can improve their style by adding descriptive techniques and varying sentence structure and syntax.For this assessment, you will revise short passages to make them more effective. There is not one correct answer. Your goal is to make intentional choices that improve the writing.After the revision, briefly explain what you changed and why.With all of that in mind, it’s time to illustrate what you’ve learned.A. Revise the passage—5 pointsThe following passage relies heavily on short, simple sentences.The Storm began suddenly. The wind became stronger. The rain started falling. People ran inside. The streets quickly flooded. The power went out.Rewrite the passage using a mix of sentence structures. Your revision must include: at least one compound sentenceat least one complex sentenceat least one compound-complex sentenceat least one sentence that remains simple for emphasisB. Explain your authorial choices —5 pointsWhat did you change about the syntax? What effect do you hope those changes will have on the reader? Explicitly identify at least one compound sentence and one complex sentence from your revision to explain how combining the original sentences improved the passage.