Part 1: Error CorrectionRead the following article. There are 15 errors in Adjective Clauses. Find and correct at least 10 of them. You will not be graded down for wrong answers, so try to find all 15.Black Holes 1 | Astronomers have long wondered how supermassive black holes, which 2 | they form under extreme gravitational forces, ended up at the center of every 3 | galaxy. Initially, the theory was simple: Black holes formed in regions, that had 4 | high concentrations of matter, and had billions of years to consume it, growing 5 | larger over time. However, as astronomers look back into the early Universe, 6 | they find more supermassive black holes who are challenging current theories, 7 | implying these must have formed quickly. 8 | The Webb Space Telescope, who has transformed astronomical 9 | observation, has brought this issue to a critical point. When matter falls into a 10 | black hole, it emits radiation whose intensity increases as the black hole 11 | consumes more matter. This radiation that can disrupt nearby matter pushes 12 | matter away, and this limits the black hole’s feeding ability. This sets a growth 13 | limit for black holes unless matter falls in directly without radiating. Early 14 | supermassive black holes, that have been observed by Webb, appear to have 15 | pushed this growth limit throughout their existence. 16 | Recently, Webb found a potential answer to this problem. It observed a 17 | black hole. That has been feeding at 40 times the theoretical limit for millions of 18 | years, growing fast enough to become supermassive. When matter falls into a 19 | black hole, it usually forms an accretion disk whose orbits and heats up, 20 | radiating energy. This radiation limits further feeding, known as the Eddington 21 | Limit, who is a fundamental concept in astrophysics. 22 | This black hole, LID-568 which was first spotted by the Chandra X-ray 23 | Telescope was identified by its X-ray brightness. Infrared imaging by Webb 24 | showed that most of its light comes from the accretion disk. Observations 25 | suggest it resides in a dwarf galaxy that the galaxy has relatively few stars, with 26 | a mass about a million times that of the Sun, making it small but unusually bright. 27 | Webb also detected high-speed gas that it was moving at over 500 28 | kilometers per second, suggesting that LID-568 has been emitting intense 29 | radiation for millions of years. The researchers concluded that this black hole, 30 | which it may have started as a smaller black hole, might have grown rapidly by 31 | feeding in a massive gas cloud. 32 | This discovery, which could it offer answers to cosmological puzzles, 33 | suggests that early black holes may have grown faster than expected. However, 34 | LID-568 is unique, and finding more black holes, that resemble it, could confirm 35 | whether this process was common in the early Universe.
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They believe that these older games will be lost to most peo…
They believe that these older games will be lost to most people because the original developers are not selling them anymore.
It’s true that most people who use emulation to play older v…
It’s true that most people who use emulation to play older video games just download them from the internet and do not pay for them.
Part 3: Sentence CorrectionHalf of the sentences in this sec…
Part 3: Sentence CorrectionHalf of the sentences in this section are correct, and half of them have errors with Noun Clauses and Reported Speech. Correct the errors, and leave the correct sentences alone. (answer blank or type correct.)
Personally, I think that this use were fine because the deve…
Personally, I think that this use were fine because the developers of those games aren’t making money from them anyway.
Part 2: Correction Explanations
Part 2: Correction Explanations
Proponents of game emulation say that playing games this way…
Proponents of game emulation say that playing games this way was an important form of preservation.
Will likes to purchase clothing at the banana republic. He r…
Will likes to purchase clothing at the banana republic. He recently filled out a customer satisfaction survey and stated that the quality of their product is superior to most other retailers. However, because of their high prices, Will doesn’t visit the store with much frequency. His consumer behavior reflects a customer who is:
According to Van Vaerenbergh and Orsingher (2016) which is n…
According to Van Vaerenbergh and Orsingher (2016) which is not an essential dimension / key decision when building a service recovery process?
A common development technique in business schools, ________…
A common development technique in business schools, ___________ allows learners to explore a real-life challenge / problem / scenario and propose some possible solutions.